Too abrupt changes, no great dialogues (even if its only a novella, they could be good and you can explain and devope things without abrupt jumps).

I really have a problem how the author tells stories. He wants to a lot of babies with her without even talking with her one time. An older a bit macho guy, but yeah he almost can not touch her without having sex and impregnating her. Josè the owner of the Salsa studio is crazy for Harper, an american college student, studying Cuba history abroad who has walked by his studio and looked into it. The jumps, the fast developement were so silly and cloudy. I didn`t want to waste my time any further. I think I`ve read into another novella by the author.Īlthough Salsa Stalker only contains a bit under 100 pages I had to give up 20 pages before the end. Fun, sexy, fanciful, versions of your wildest wet dream. However, despite its flaws you will appreciate it for what it is, a free taste of the insanely alpha-male, over the top, taste of what Ferrari offers the literary world. Is it the best writing, free from typos, transition errors, and awkward phrasing? No, no it isn't, in fact, in places it reads more like a first draft than a final one. Is it a bit silly, at times almost an over blown possessive, chest beating, 'latin-lover' stereotype? Yes, yes it is. What follows is an over-the-top, fanciful, insta-everything typical of Ferrari's stories. He, after getting a single glimpse of her, has already decided she's the one and begins gathering every bit of information he can on her in order to make her his. She purposely walks past his studio everyday in order to catch a glimpse at the sexy dance instructor she's secretly crushing on.

And Jose, a tall, dark, and handsome former cop turned dance studio owner/instructor.

The story of Harper, a college student, healing from a bad break-up while studying Cuba history and culture during a study abroad period. And being the sucker that I am for a good, sexy, short story, I couldn't resist.Īnd, for the most point, 'Salsa Stalker' didn't disappoint. It is also one of several Faerrari gives away for free when readers sign-up for her author newsletter. 'Salsa Stalker' is one in an ever growing 125+ novella collection written by by Flora Ferrari.

Baby Lust by Flora Ferrari